Mission 4.3 - OCC comments

[davidramsey]

Ok, just thought I'd mention it ...

[Matthew Reynolds]

Okay, I know that I'm not a member of your crew, but could you guys get back to posting. I have been following your mission since the beginning (something your CO knows) and I'm itching to read more.

So please help me out here and post.

[Deleted]

So I'm assuming we want the two groups to meet in battle before we get rescued. Some timeing like:

Harrias looked across the bloody street at the opposing army and was astonished to see Commander Steve, he was about to call out to her when the Drammar Captain gave the order to charge. He never got the oppertunity to decide his next move as the medieval street was replaced with the transporter room of an intrepid class vessel

Except a little more skillfully written then that. We are several posts from this type of a standoff since Harrias's team has not even left for battle yet.

I am more then willing to play the role of the rescue ship being as both my s47 characters are "out of commision"

[fthelev]

mattreynolds said:

Okay, I know that I'm not a member of your crew, but could you guys get back to posting. I have been following your mission since the beginning (something your CO knows) and I'm itching to read more.

So please help me out here and post.

Don't you fret, I'm back and working on it. Patience dear commander.

[Deleted]

Okay so in my post as Edwin the Rutherford's CMO I have established that the transport of Nevada crew has begun beginning with the crew in the mountains. Since we will be beamed up later you can simm your beam up whenever you are ready.

[fthelev]

I think at we should at least advance with the story untill the final clash between the Draamar and the Kreld, so that we have some sort of climax instead of just breaking off the story like that.

[Deleted]

Sure, the Rutherford is going to have a hard time locating us anyway given the fact we are surrounded by the humanoid locals

[fthelev]

Come on people post!!!
The only ones who actually did something this month were Commander Lorre and myself. And we were on LOA for most of the time. Is it that hard to find an hour or two a week and write something? This is really sad!

[brelev]

Frek and I have a great mission lined up, but this one needs to end first. If you can write even a paragraph please do! Anything to progress the story.

[Harrias Jira]

Yes, that's right, thine eyes have not deceived thee, I have indeed posted, and about bloody time too! Never know, may get another out of me within a month .

[Deleted]

quick head for the bunker the end is here!!

Thanks Harrias

[gracemitchell]

Okay, I know I am no longer a member of this crew. In fact I am not a member of any crew since I have to resign however I felt a need to point out that there are more pages in the Mission OCC thread then in the actual Misison thread. Not to be picky or anything but it looked a little funny to me!

I know I can be a bit nosy!

[Deleted]

Yeah, we should be working on that any day now.....

Speaking of, my apologise to all for a lack of activity (specifically to Frek (Mark) since I was supposed to contact him this week through MSN to finalize the next mission plans).

My excuse is: University Orientation. Two days of sheer insanity followed by two days of classes which mainly consisted of me a) wondering around trying to find my classes etc and b) being invited to a variety of festivities on campus. All in all it's been a crazy crazy week. I should however be online to my regular extent beginning Saturday

[fthelev]

I forgive you , don't know how orientation is in Canada, but here we call it 'introduction week'. It's one of those weeks that usually end very badly and with a terrible headache.
Ah well, the price of, uhm, fun...